Here is my english version, as I can't type a correct chinese version.
這篇文章是英文版, 因為我無法正確打出中文版本.

I was born in GuangDong. I went to Canada in 1999 and had a baby girl in 2000, then I went to college
to learn computer and the child was sent to Guangdong, China. As IT field is very bad these years, I
can't find a job after that and I had to do some temporary data entry jobs. That kind of job is difficult to find as well and I was always unemployed.
我出生在中國廣東, 1999年到加拿大, 翌年生了一個小女兒, 接著我進大學學電腦,小女兒送回廣東去. 由於IT產業這幾年很不景氣, 畢業後找不到工作, 只能作個暫時性的資料輸入員, 要找到與所學有關的工作不容易,而且我也一直在失業中.

I am now in school again to learn some health care knowledge. I am afraid the same thing happen again when I graduate. As my father was found to have a stomache cancer last year, my daughter was back and she is in day care centre so I can go to school and look for a job.
現在我又回學校去, 選讀與身體保健有關的課程, 我很擔心這次我畢業後, 相同的情形又會發生. 由於我父親在去年被發現罹患胃癌, 我女兒回去陪他, 白天去讀托兒所, 所以我可以重回學校,同時也可以找個工作.

I was a good student when I was a child and teachers likes me. I went to a good middle school and a famous university as well.
Before immigration, I worked in a big bank in international deparment dealing with import and export documents. Now it is not practical for me to go back and I am wondering what I should do? Do I still have some future ? Will my bad luck end?

小時候我是個好學生, 老師也很喜歡我. 我進了一個很好的高中, 後來也進了一所有名的大學.
在移民加拿大前, 我在一家大銀行的國際部門上班, 處理進出口文件. 當前的現實我是無法回去的, 那我應該要怎麼作才好, 我還有未來嗎, 我的惡運結束了嗎?

I am not sure about the exact time when I was born. Is it 5:00am or 7:00am? I just know it is in early morning.
I was born in 1971/ 12/14
我不確定自己的正確出生時間, 五點還是七點? 只知大約在清晨而已. 我生在1971年12月14日.

Thank you for your help and I will respond to your analysis and suggestion.
RGDS,
感謝您的幫助, 對於您的分析與建議, 我會反饋的.

Alice